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#1 CHRISTOPHER310

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Posted 15 August 2014 - 06:45 PM

Junk I write....

 

Revise Your Lies

Revise your lies...
Cause they gotten old,
All been told,
So many times before,
I’m so bored,
Needing to hear something new,
Someone not you.

So revise your lies,
And tell them to someone else,
Practice telling them to yourself,
Maybe then someone will care,
The vomit I had to hear.

Revise your lies...
Revise your lies...
Revise your lies...

It’s only the hope for you that dies,
Only the truth hidden behind shabby disguise,
So easily seen through,
Just like you,
Behind that fake smile,
Just a pile of vile,
For who you are,
Just one more scare,
On this heart of mine,
In the passage of forgotten time,

I go on...
...I go on
You keep going wrong,
So...

Revise your lies
Revise your lies
Revise...your...lies!

...Cause they gotten old,
All been told,
So many times before,
I’m so bored,
Need to hear something new,
Someone not you!

Written by: Christopher **** ~ August 15th, 2014



#2 Charles Miles

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Posted 16 August 2014 - 10:54 PM

Strange line of thought in your above post.  You say you rote it, so now I have a question.  Who was it written to/for?



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Posted 17 August 2014 - 06:14 AM

I wrote it with thoughts of my ex in mind, but I kept it clean compare to sharing more detailed truths.